Okay, so these are my ideas for a story I'm writing. Please comment!!!!
Riley is on deserted island with parents studying natives
Tsunami comes, parents leave her behind by accident
Raised by natives
Finds random girl from shipwreck
Helps her build boat to sail home with magic
Girl tells father about island and magic
Father captures natives to do testing, brings them to NYC
Riley escapes with a baby and a 4-year-old, but her magic shell is broken and she is slowly fading
Passes out and wakes up floating in the ocean
